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Erased Childhood
Contributed by
WestCPunk
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Bloodshot eyes
Unesessary cries
Vermilion colored face
A complete disgrace
All this anxiety
Forever scars me
My mind is always cloudy
I have a great ambition to succeed
May this heart of mine
Never again bleed
My life lies there
In the palm of my hand
And all I can do is stare
With this terrifyed glare
So many roads to choose from
And I can only select one
I feel so unwanted
Life got so complicated
Completely misunderstood
dreadful childhood
Now I'm getting older
All I need now is closure
Never again will I
Sulk in my past
It's time for me to tell it goodbye
At last
I've finally erased
My childhood past!
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
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2004-07-30 20:45:06]
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Re: Erased Childhood
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:53:42 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem..... you are a tremendeous poet! |
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Re: Erased Childhood
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:06:08 PM AEST
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I knew it! I knew I was right. You are far more intelligent than you have let anyone know. Dang, I love being right! lol
Rita |
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Re: Erased Childhood
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:42:26 AM AEST
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| very sharp expression.. very well written poem..venkat |
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