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Forget about me
Contributed by
bohemian_with_a_pen
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:57:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dear world,
Dont worry, in a few months
you'll forget who i really am
who i really was
i'll just be another number
on ur clipboard of statistics
Do me one last favour
as i lie here cold and lifeless
look past the
red eyes
pale skin
oily hair
the used veins of a 14 year old
pierced with needle marks
see me for who i really am
who i really was
and let me Rest In Peace
I know i did some bad things
Said some harsh words
But I'll be silent
Forever more
Please tell my friends
its not their fault
I just couldnt keep living my
empty, lonely, loveless life
So i thankyou
from the bottom of my bleeding, broken heart
for taking the time to get to know someone
who wasnt worth any time at all
so hand out my things
board up my room
and forget about me
Copyright ©
bohemian_with_a_pen
... [
2004-07-30 18:57:13]
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Re: Forget about me
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by blackmarker on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:27:34 PM AEST
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| Very sad, emotional. I'm sorry you feel this way! |
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Re: Forget about me
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:44:33 PM AEST
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Very moving and disturbing poem. You express your feelings extremely well and your words are stabbing and thought provoking. I see much talent here. Keep it up!
Laurie |
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Re: Forget about me
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:58:33 AM AEST
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awwwww I am really sorry that you feel like this, I have been there myself, but I have pulled through and I am sure that you will be able to one day. a very sad and deep write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Forget about me
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:40:56 PM AEST
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| Mmm.. nice write. The last bit reminded me of Adam's song by Blink 182. Sorry you had to go through that... Kinda sounds like me... |
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Re: Forget about me
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:59:44 PM AEST
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Im soo sry you feel this way...stay strong and try to make it through this... i hope you can find something that will make u want to live...great write
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Forget about me
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by iluvpencils on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:31:39 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is a really emotional poem. I know I feel better after writing and I hope you do too. Best wishes. |
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Re: Forget about me
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by secretwind on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:36:57 AM AEST
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| Deep emotional flow.... |
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Re: Forget about me
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:40:24 PM AEST
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I hope you don't feel like this anymore...You are young, talented and have lots to live for...
Hugs
Jenni |
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