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A Fearful Beast
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The ocean seems a great and fearful beast
now spewing foam far o'er ships seen and beach.
Storms rakes their fierce claws o'er wet boards then feast
on souls gone low in waves' strong greenish reach.
Assualt's worse any trouble you have dreamed.
It craves devouring sailing oak that floats.
But we must tame this wild and raging fiend
with lines and courage using fine built boats.
Give me this challenge rather most than ease.
It beats the life of a twist maker clean.
Yes, I want life on ocean's deep bad seas
with mates some salty others really mean.
Gone be the days when iron seamen sailed
but Sea Witch time for evermore is hailed.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2004-07-30 17:44:22]
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Re: A Fearful Beast
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:00:25 PM AEST
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spoken as if enamored by the lady of the water. from an old salt, well done.
thanks for sharing............... |
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Re: A Fearful Beast
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by Mihiri on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:37:03 AM AEST
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I like the way u think. Wonderful elaboration of the ocean. This is really good work!
Loads'a crazZzy grins, Mihiri |
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