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Just a drink
Contributed by
Intostella
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:40:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I fell so hard one day
I'll never ever get up
It's harder every day
You try and you fail
I'll try again tomorrow
If I can wake up
What really is the point
It hurts, but not that much
It grinds away inside
Death, but so so slow
Indescribable lethargy
Unbelievable hate
Of myself that is
A sorry sorry state
I whirl around again
I seesaw up and down
I sip again from my glass
Hoping that I drown.
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Intostella
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2004-07-30 15:40:20]
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Re: Just a drink
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:42:55 PM AEST
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im glad i clicked on this. I have done this oh sooo many times in my saddened state that I was in. It reminded me of that. This is a very well versed poem. I like the style in which you write. Good job.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Just a drink
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by priss on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:34:49 PM AEST
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| nicely written. |
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Re: Just a drink
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:17:51 PM AEST
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| SO SAD BUT SO BEAUTIFULL- I HAVE A BROTHER THAT"SIPS AGAIN FROM HIS GLASS HOPING THAT HE'LL DROWN." BUT I HOPE NEITHER ONE OF YOU DO- GOOD LUCK. GREAT WRITE |
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Re: Just a drink
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:09:46 AM AEST
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| wow, thiz iz awesome! i hear ya man!!!! |
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