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Wait With Me
Contributed by
Cris
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 02:51:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Wait With Me
I will be there in one moment,
to find you standing near.
Let me finish all I started,
my journey is not clear.
The chapter has not ended,
my soul it still moves on.
Time is not an issue,
I see you in the dawn.
Wait With Me
Our friends are still coming,
people of a new.
Joy is what they give me,
when I remeber you.
As I will be coming,
if not in a moment or two.
Time is not an issue,
to spend forever with you.
Wait With Me
Copyright ©
Cris
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2004-07-30 14:51:33]
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Re: Wait With Me
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by darkplaidbabe on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:25:28 PM AEST
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your words flow really well, the rythm is perfect. you definitely have a gift. great write!
Brynna |
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Re: Wait With Me
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:38:48 PM AEST
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I really like the style of this piece. It's beautiful.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Wait With Me
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:24:44 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Wait With Me
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:24:51 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Wait With Me
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by brew on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:32:40 PM AEST
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| Great write............flowing words to one! |
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Re: Wait With Me
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by pixie on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:03:53 AM AEST
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a very great write,
pixie xx |
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