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Rail Road Tracks
Contributed by
Alina
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 02:26:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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When he goes to his Pusher
Everything he finds
A place for his heart
A place for his mind
Down to the tracks
Slowly he walks
He finds himself at,
At the Pawn Shop
With the wind in the night
The RAVEN to his back
Once again,
In and out
He follows his tracks.
Light the Bowl (3)
Follow your tracks
Tracks around the city
He taught her to follow
On mistake she came about him
Now she can't breathe with out him
She began to loose her life
She finds it all at the Pusher hands
Most of the time for free
But both hands are staind
In this sin City
The tracks in her mind
The tracks on her arm
Suffocating in his beautiful charm
So little for so much harm.
Turn off the Bowl
Empty the Bowl
Turn off the Bowl
Disappearing Tracks.....
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-07-30 14:26:13]
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by darkplaidbabe on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:18:22 PM AEST
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i love this write!!! beautiful imagery and descriptions. the message is mysterious at first but clear in the end. keep writing, i look forward to it. if you ever need to talk, IM me.
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by pvd on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:23:58 PM AEST
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I love the content and subject of this poem. Check spelling. Keep writing it's better than dope.
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:39:36 PM AEST
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mysterious,well written, and with a good meaning.excellent job!
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by bttrflynajar on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:05:09 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, no other words to describe it
~bttrfly~ |
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:29:08 PM AEST
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| great song. |
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by priss on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 12:38:57 PM AEST
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| nice, i like it alot. |
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:21:51 PM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE IM SURE IT WILL HAVE GREAT IMPACT ON A LOT OF PEOPLE - KEEP IT UP |
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Re: Rail Road Tracks
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:14:00 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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