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Of Dying Love
Contributed by
RavenMarieKrashauna
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:52:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Deep down inside
Much deeper than pride
In the depths of your soul it echos and reeks
It's pain's poison as it seeks
A memory of love lost long ago
A red glare shines on your shadow
Now deeper than the deepest red
As it burns throuh your soul like hot lead
It was my heart which cried and said empty
All so empty
Copyright ©
RavenMarieKrashauna
... [
2004-07-30 13:52:37]
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Re: Of Dying Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:40:47 PM AEST
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This is very good, very sdtrong with a short amount of words. Great write!
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Of Dying Love
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:02:55 PM AEST
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short,sweet and brilliant. a wonderful piece. keep writing and ill keep reading
~vermillion~ |
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