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Immortal Pain
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I have to cut, I have to
The urge is more than I can bare
My souls begining to tear
I hate who I am,
I want to die
*Chorus
I cant take anymore
The pain is just to much
Its so hard
And everyone hates me anyways
I want to die*
No one cares, Im so alone
I cant take anymore
Now I want to open the gun drawer
I dont know what to do
Im sick of crying
I have to cut, I need to
I wanna give up,
Biggest urge to cut,
Damn that promise
*Chorus
I cant take anymore
The pain is just to much
Its so hard
And everyone hates me anyways
I want to die*
I needed someone to talk to so bad
There was no one, I have no one
I was left alone, wanting to die
I dont want to live anymore
I dont know what to do
I cant take anymore
I miss her so much
Everyone hates me,
Everyone
*Chorus
I cant take anymore
The pain is just to much
Its so hard
And everyone hates me anyways
I want to die*
Ugly, scumbag, stupid
Annoying, hated, Rejected
Afraid Paranoid Freak
Guilty, depressed, looser
Alone, Suicidal,...
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Re: Immortal Pain
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:42:42 PM AEST
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wow this is a very hurt and pain filled poem, please try and keep strong, you can beat this, it will take awhile, but it will be the most worthwhile thing you will ever do....... no-one hates you hun *hugs you*
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Re: Immortal Pain
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:56:30 PM AEST
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there was a whole lotta hurt in that poem. and it was very well expressed. you really captured the pain and tourment of it all.
excellent work.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Immortal Pain
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by bttrflynajar on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:44:09 PM AEST
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thats a lot of hurt for a single poem to bare.
very expressive and emotional.
~bttrfly~ |
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Re: Immortal Pain
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:48:17 PM AEST
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| very deep and emotional. great write. |
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