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A look into the future
Contributed by
DreamsOfDark
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
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Then I took a look into my soul I saw my past and all of this I did behold...
I saw a girl curled up in the grass, She cried the pain was deep inside, you could hear the drugs in her voice, she called to me - stay by my side...
Then I took a look into my soul I saw my past and all of this I did behold...
I saw a teen upon the floor, I saw the blood and all the gore, I saw her wrist it was cut deep and wide, then I saw her eyes and they were mine...
Then I took a look into my soul I saw my past and all of this I did behold...
I saw a woman in a hospital bed, and I realized she was almost dead, that’s when I knew that I would be there If I didn’t stop my pain inside. Right now...
Then I took a look into my soul I saw my past and all of this I did behold...
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Re: A look into the future
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 02:25:04 PM AEST
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| this is a very good write...a wonderful way to write a poem. Please keep them coming you have a great talent! |
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Re: A look into the future
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 09:56:21 AM AEST
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| this reminds me of a lot of ld things i wrote... dunno why. it's so familiar. so very eerie it is. good write, keep it up! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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