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When I Look At You
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:09:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I hear ringing in my ears,
I cry only happy tears,
I feel like I can walk on air,
I know that you will always be there.
I can hear my heart thud,
I feel like a lover should,
I see the love you hold,
I hear the calling of your soul.
I know that this is real,
I can see the love I feel,
I turn & pull you to me,
I feel like you have set me free.
I whisper words only for you,
I feel the passion & know it’s true,
I hear the song that you sing,
I know of the happiness you will bring.
I love to feel your warm touch,
I want you now so very much,
I know that this is simply the best,
I am sure that this will survive any test.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-30 12:09:34]
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Re: When I Look At You
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by brew on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:11:53 PM AEST
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| How wondeful to have one to look and gaze at, and know the heart is so true! Faboulous writing! |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:13:12 PM AEST
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| so wonderfully expressed love - I can picture you shouting it from the rooftops. |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:52:15 PM AEST
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I relate to lots in this exquisite expression of love... here's a few favorite lines of mine:
"I cry only happy tears"
"I know that this is real,
I can see the love I feel,"
"I love to feel your warm touch,
I want you now so very much,"
Enchanting, pixie. It's a fantastic poem.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:23:07 PM AEST
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It is so refreshing to hear someone is in love and truly knows it is real. It is so hard to find and I am so terribly happy for you. Keep smiling and keep loving.
Rita |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:54:05 PM AEST
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I am so happy for you....this is a wonderful write....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 02:39:03 PM AEST
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| Congrats pixie on the graet write and your feelings of love :) |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Lost_Shadow on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:30:28 PM AEST
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| I wish I could feel like this at least once. I find it very hard to get attached to someone. Nice write my dear. |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Lost_Shadow on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:30:30 PM AEST
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| I wish I could feel like this at least once. I find it very hard to get attached to someone. Nice write my dear. |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:08:53 PM AEST
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You have such great talent pixie. Each of your poems are unique and enjoyable. Great write. Take care!
Kimberly :) |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:50:00 PM AEST
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beautifully loving and heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: When I Look At You
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:18:14 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful and adorable write. venkat |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:48:48 AM AEST
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May you always cry tears of joy !!
Good work......made me smile
steve |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:18:18 AM AEST
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very beautiful pixie I'm so very happy for you. this was so perfect. great job
Brandy |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:12:35 AM AEST
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just so beautiful. great expression of your love for mark.
love
Gen xx |
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