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FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:30:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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U LEFT AND BROKE MY HEART
U TOLD ME I DID NOT LOVE U.
JUST THE OTHER NIGHT OUR PATHS CROSSED
AND U LOOKED LIKE U WERE SURPRISED
THAT THERE WERE NO TEARS IN MY EYES.
THERE WONT BE ANY TEARS FOR U TO SEE.
I HAVE CRYED MY LAST TEAR FOR U.
I DON'T KNOW WHY U HAD TO END WHAT WE HAD,
BUT I WON'T SIT HERE ALL DAY AND JUST BE SAD.
U ASKED HOW I WAS DOING, DID U LIKE THE ANSWER U GOT.
I TOLD U I'M DOING JUST FINE.
U LOOKED IN MY EYES I FELT MY HEART MELT.
THEN I REMEMBERED ALL THE TEARS I ONCE FELT
GO AWAY
LEAVE ME BE
COZ FOR ONCE MY SOUL IS FREE...
U WANTED ME TO FORGET HIM
WHO WAS ALL I HAD TO DEPEND ON
U WANTED TO PLAY UR GAMES
NOW ITS FUNNY WHEN U CALL ME NAMES.
GROW UP
LEARN IT WAS UR FAULT.
LET ME BE
I AM FREE///
LEAVE NOW THERES NOTHING HERE FOR U NOW
MAYBE NEXT TIME OUR PATHS CROSS
U WILL TRUELY SEE IT WAS UR LOSS...
Copyright ©
brokenwings
... [
2004-07-30 09:30:24]
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Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:36:18 AM AEST
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Emotional write. I felt this way a couple of years ago about a guy. But I eventually got over it. And im glad you did too!
Kimberly :) |
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Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:28:58 AM AEST
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Very well expressed emotions. Great job.
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Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:49:33 AM AEST
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Beautifully and emotionally well expressed....
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Re: FIRST TIME OUR PATHS CROSSED
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by Solnubis on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:54:32 AM AEST
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| Very good poem and good atitude. |
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