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The Colour of Black
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:04:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I thought I got rid of that hatred smell
The one that makes loneliness dwell
Where lovers quarrel and family friends fell
Into a box where there’s nothing anyone wants to tell
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SweetRhythm
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2004-07-30 09:04:42]
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Re: The Colour of Black
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:48:22 PM AEST
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Thats happened to me before,
good luck with those feelings.
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Re: The Colour of Black
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by Dan666 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:27:33 PM AEST
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Re: The Colour of Black
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by bttrflynajar on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:42:15 PM AEST
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um? is not a very helpfula coment at all
i loved your little sentiment
and hope that you can enlarge that into a poem someday
but of course as the art it is it is complete
and so it does not need to be extended.
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