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A Love Story
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:35:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Kiss me here and kiss me there,
Tell me baby that you really care,
Feeling your body next to mine,
Stops my heart, stops all times,
Just hold me now don’t let me go,
Hold my hand, let’s take it slow,
Feels like we’d be here forever,
Just lying here being together,
The midnight sky held high above,
The murky moon shows our love,
My pain is a memory in the past,
Cos I know our love will truly last,
Just hug me now, be with me,
To let the people pass and see,
And just with the rising morning sun,
My broken heart was again a one
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2004-07-30 06:35:26]
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Re: A Love Story
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:39:21 AM AEST
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Very nice. Love the lines "The midnight sky held high above,
The murky moon shows our love,"
Great verse.
WinterFawn
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Re: A Love Story
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:44:41 AM AEST
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Very romantic, for one who says they don't write happy poems... You should do this more often.....
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Re: A Love Story
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:10:40 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni. I think that you should write happy poems more often you have a real talent for them as well as your emotional writes
pixie xx |
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Re: A Love Story
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:28:03 AM AEST
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For a person that don't write happy poems .
Did a very well done job on this one...beautiful and romantic.... |
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Re: A Love Story
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:43:30 AM AEST
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Auh this is truly beautiful. The words melted my heart, its very touching sweet romantic tale. Lovely work.
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