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Your Cold Heart
Contributed by
Living_In_my_dream
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 11:31:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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We were in flame before our touch
Your heart to mine in a strong clutch
And then we kissed tight in the air,
Your hands in breeze rushed through my hair.
Your breath and mine were made to one
A thing my life had never gone
Your soul encasing to my soul,
You were the first to see my fall.
We worried of our distant flesh
So from the stars we made a wish
You nailed my heart a heavy swear,
And through the years I kept you dear.
I wondered why as days went by
My heart began a silent cry
A knock at door by loneliness,
Sent a message of lost caress.
Now in the midst of summernight
To me a cold breeze took a flight
Reminiscing of our depart,
This breeze must be from your cold heart.
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2004-07-29 23:31:05]
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Re: Your Cold Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:27:41 PM AEST
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sooo beautifully heartfelt and moving:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Your Cold Heart
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:45:38 AM AEST
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A sad yet excellent write. Very well versed. How easily the words run into eachother. Another very enjoyable read with an intriguing story!
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