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A Thousand Words Away
Contributed by
Calista
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:49:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A Thousand Words Away
July 28, 2004
We
Will always be
A thousand words away
What you want i cannot give
How you are
I will not live
This way
We
Will always be
A thousand words away
And what i thought that i could do
Makes no sense
To you
I never meant the things i said
Just being around you
Makes me
Cry, then smile instead.
Copyright ©
Calista
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2004-07-29 22:49:50]
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Re: A Thousand Words Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:33:18 AM AEST
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Nice work!
I liked the way it ended.
Shows the way love hopes against hope.
And goes beyond logic. |
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Re: A Thousand Words Away
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 06:50:11 PM AEST
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"What you want i cannot give
How you are
I will not live"
I like these lines. I feel the same... another great poem, you have a way with your words. A++++
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