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Angelousy
Contributed by
Ripper_Something_Unusual
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:06:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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He sits there so relaxed,
No point in being here now,
I could rule this place, (If only I had the chance)
(You would be fantastic) I have to stop thinking like this,
I must accept my place (Accept nothing)
Listen to my voice,
It goes down so easy,
Like honey dripping into your rotting ear,
It purifies the wound.
Yes I understand my place now,
My heart has turned black,
My wings have now decayed,
The raindrops hit my skin,
Soon to be blood drops,
Nurse fetch the scalpel,
Operation time is near,
(You know you want it,
You know you need it)
Want it,
Need it,
He is no longer my God
I am his God.
(As the chosen one began his quest,
Black wings did sprout)
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Re: Angelousy
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by beatleman on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:12:38 PM AEST
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| i really like it! I am new to the site so i havent seen anything else you have done but if its anything like this u have a fan |
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Re: Angelousy
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by Asatru on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:27:09 PM AEST
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| I really likes this, it's just really, really good - excellent. Keep writing. |
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Re: Angelousy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:40:11 PM AEST
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. . . and if I don't like it?
lol. Just teasing.
Its interesting - the ambition of immortality woven in with the macabre frustration of mortality.
Keep writing. |
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