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Hey dad

Contributed by savedbydeath on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic: FathersDayPoems



how can i miss you?i don't even know you
how can you miss me?you don't even know me
you're not even a man how can you be a father
why do i even bother?i'm just wasten time

you have problems,you were never theres
for your kids,when kids of my own come
i'll never leave their sides,so many things
your gonna miss out,so many things we're gona need

hey dad,how can we start all over,please look at
me,i hope you remember me,your only daughter
stands before you,will you even realize me,do you
truly love me dearly,i highly doubt it,your not a man

oh god,i amonly young,what did i do to deserve this
will i ever know how to forget him,hes not a father
hes not a man,oh god,i gave him many chances
many that he took and wasted,oh god

a man i never knew,a man whos not even a man
we can never start over,your not a man,your not
my father,i don't know you,how do you make it through
all them long nights thinking of us,i doubt you think of us

thinking of you makes me so mad,but i'm quite glad
you're not here making our lifes miserable like yours
get out of my head,why won't i just die,when you look at me
you look disapointed,is there something wrong?

hey dad,how can we start all over,please look at
me,i hope you remember me,your only daughter
stands before you,will you even realize me,do you
truly love me dearly,i highly doubt it,your not a man





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Re: Hey dad (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:12:53 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this,my father is here on earth but i feel like i'm on jupiter,cause he pretty much deserted me,but hell i don't have to put up with him and its his loss,this poem is great i could not do it any better myself


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Re: Hey dad (User Rating: 1 )
by beatleman on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:20:10 PM AEST
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i love it. its really a well done poem. I feel for you and i might know a fraction of what ur going through by my own home life. great job on the poem


Re: Hey dad (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:57:05 PM AEST
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Each of us is born free of fear, guilt, hate, anger, etc.. To be carrying any of these means to be carrying a burden which belongs to someone else; to release them and return them back to the ones who own them is a step towards freeing oneself, thus becoming the person one is. When you have children, may you have the strength to not pass on the same burdens which you now carry. oxo




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