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-Nobody Cares-
Contributed by
crimsonxxxflow
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:48:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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these tears they're rolling down her eyes
so many people are living in lies
she'd rather have them burn in hell
then for her to cry
and hide in her shell
she can't forgive them for wut they've done
she's been cut deep
and her scars are going to last as long as the sun
it's almost as if they can't see her there
she's shivering...shaking...she's so scared
of the world that we're living in here
she has no friends...
not even one peer...
she has to live; always in fear
not even one day goes by
without her shedding a tear...
nobody cares
nobody cares
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crimsonxxxflow
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2004-07-29 19:48:35]
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Re: -Nobody Cares-
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:34:18 PM AEST
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knock-knock,
hey crimson, you don't know me, but i am your friend. open the door a crack so we can get to know each other to let our friendship grow.
the voice
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Re: -Nobody Cares-
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:04:43 PM AEST
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| Seems to me that you care. That makes nobody minus 1. "hugs" |
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Re: -Nobody Cares-
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by pixie on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:46:13 AM AEST
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I have to voice what The Voice has said ( that sounds silly the way I put it lol)
Open up and let us in, we are all here willing to be your friend and listen to you.
very emotional and dark poem
pixie xx |
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Re: -Nobody Cares-
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:25:05 PM AEST
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as everyone else said...we are all willing to be ur friend just let us in....great write....
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: -Nobody Cares-
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by CRIMSONxXxFLOW on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:03:35 AM AEST
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| ok people...i love u all...thanks for caring...this poem actually wasn't about me...yeah i wrote it while i was kinda..."down" but it honestly wasn't about me...lol...i do have friends...and they love me like i love them^_^ and just because i wrote this doesn't mean i don't have any (or a lot)...because people DO care about me...this is just how i was feeling at the time...(rough day lol) but i'm fine...thanks for caring again lol -jaimee |
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