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I Bleed
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Cut me and I will bleed
Cut me - make me free
Steal from me,
Lie to me
Convince me this is all a dream
I stare at my reflection
So hollow in this window
Life flies past without me
I know
It's like I'm heading nowhere
But I just can't get here fast evough
It's like I'm heading nowhere
But I'm already there
Cut me and I will bleed
Cut me - make me free
Steal from me
Lie to me
Convince me this is all a dream
Deceive me and I bleed
Deceive me and I...
Deceive me and I
Fall
To
Pieces
Copyright ©
iluvpencils
... [
2004-07-29 17:02:29]
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Re: I Bleed
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:05:42 PM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE! i loved this so much. i can relate to this so well. you expressed this amazingly. |
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Re: I Bleed
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:05:58 PM AEST
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very powerful and sad write.... I can feel your pain leap out of the screen at me..... keep strong,
pixie xx |
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Re: I Bleed
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by waos on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:10:37 PM AEST
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| i like the ending the best. good job. |
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Re: I Bleed
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by julu on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:59:33 AM AEST
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| very good poem. you put so much feeling in to it. i enjoy your work. |
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