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Deadly Whispers
Contributed by
screwup
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:55:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In the blackest night, deadly whispers rise to the surface
through the deepest secrets and deepest thoughts
they race through my mind as the demon grabs my soul
she takes hold and never lets go
she whispers into my ears
she is the voice that speaks when no one is around
and screams inside
as the screams pierce my ears,
my soul is being destroyed
every last piece of it sacrificed
now dead is me
the knife pierces my pure white skin,
as the deadly whispers run through my mind
the blood runs down for the demon inside
as she begs me to die
she gasps onto my heart
as I put the pistol in my mouth
I pull the trigger and all I hear is the deadly whispers
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2004-07-29 16:55:34]
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Re: Deadly Whispers
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:01:23 PM AEST
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this is very dark and such a sad write... *hugs*
I hope that you can find happiness and a way out of your deep depression, you are not alone.....
pixie xx |
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Re: Deadly Whispers
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:04:17 PM AEST
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dark and deep write. great job .. you expressed this so well..
i to hope you can find your way out of the depression, and who knows maybe writting this and posting it for all to see helped some. |
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