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the Voice of Innocenss
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:43:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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climb into the tub
filled with water
the water seems to sparkle
just like the way my eyes used to
but thats all over now
it all stopped after i changed
float to the bottom and slowly let out my air
watch as the bubbles rise o the surface
my lungs begin to burn
there is a screaming in my head
ive been trying so hard to make it go away
its the screaming soul of my child self
i break to the surface
takeing in gulps of air
why dose it always do that
just when ive almost done it
it crys and stops me from acomplishing it all
too selfish to let me go of all this misery
my heart cant take anymore of this
each day it fills with pain, hurt and regret
do i have a purpose
is it to let others feel better of themselfs because i was born
i used to be a caring person
now i dont care about anything
im just so dead inside
just numb
i dont feel comfortable in this skin any more
it just isnt me
i lean back into the water
and watch my hair curl around my body
i think to myself
dont listen to it
i cover my ears to try and block out its crys
its voice seems too echo through out the liquid expanse
i slam my head repeatedly onto the walls
they slowly come closer locking me in ever closer
i slowly scrunch my self up into a tiny ball
my last breath catchs in my throat
as i scream
along with the voice of my child soul
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-07-29 16:43:37]
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Re: the Voice of Innocenss
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:47:14 PM AEST
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wow, powerful, sad and written very beautifully
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: the Voice of Innocenss
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:09:42 PM AEST
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| wow. i relate to that so well...this is an amazing write. i've been trying for so long to come up with the perfect way to express this and now you have done it. wonderful write! |
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