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MY NEEDS
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:26:31 PM in AEST
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I AM HERE WITH MY HEART OPEN
ALL MY LOVE IS HERE FOR THE TAKING
BUT PLEASE BE KIND TO THIS TENDER HEART OF MINE
IT HAS BARELY HEALED... IT NEEDS TENDERNESS
I NEED TO BE HELD CLOSE ALL NIGHT LONG
WHEN WE WAKE I NEED TENDER KISSES
IN THE MIDDLE OF THE DAY JUST CALL
JUST CALL TO TELL ME HELLO
I NEED TO BE TOLD IT WILL ALL BE ALRIGHT
I NEED TO KNOW THAT I WILL NOT BE ALONE.
BUT WHAT I NEED THE MOST
IS JUST A FRIEND.
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2004-07-29 16:26:31]
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Re: MY NEEDS
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:31:27 PM AEST
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you will find many friends on here :) *hugs*
good write, very honest and touching
pixie xx |
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Re: MY NEEDS
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by princess8383 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:31:42 PM AEST
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I think you've really covered what all people are looking for in a mate, good write : )
Princess : )
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Re: MY NEEDS
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:33:05 PM AEST
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| Groovy. Touching sentiments and a very effective poem --the Moth |
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Re: MY NEEDS
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:37:37 PM AEST
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Good write.... I think lots will agree that those are great qualities to look for in a man..... a friend first and foremost...
Jenni |
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Re: MY NEEDS
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by cauchy3 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:14:39 PM AEST
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| You tell me in your poem that you need a diamond rings . I wish all your lives have the bases of brass but your rings are good diamonds |
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