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Her Children's Dreams
Contributed by
Sagacious
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:24:39 PM in AEST
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In what conscious dream does mankind dwell,
Wherein thoughts conceived of emotion's range
Proffer some stellar Creator
vicarious life?
For in those depths of space,
Where individuals burn bright
But closeness cannot exist,
Could not the chill of solitude
Pierce through to the fiery core
Of even the brightest of stars?
And what earthbound witness
Might perceive in her domain
Sorrow in the midst of beauty,
While forces yet uncontrolled
Unleash their cosmic residue
Despite eternal isolation?
If life did reside within that blazing heart,
And if sleep did overtake her unnurtured soul,
Would not her children's dreams
become her own?
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Sagacious
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2004-07-29 16:24:39]
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Re: Her Children's Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:21:09 PM AEST
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And what earthbound witness
Might perceive in her domain
Sorrow in the midst of beauty
I love that your poems make me think, and I love what your poems make me think, and I loved these lines especially. (although the solitude was captured well too -
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Re: Her Children's Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:39:31 PM AEST
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this is absolutely breathtaking, i could read more of this all night:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Her Children's Dreams
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:32:46 PM AEST
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.....Sagacious, you have done it again, my friend... I am breathless and nothing is going through my mind except "Here is perfection." there is nothing more that i can say but the ladder, and how you have made me percieve things differently now... I thank you for this beautiful poem... all my love and respect...
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