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Rock Bottom
Contributed by
TwEeK
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i've dug as far as i can
i have hit rock bottom
cant no longer go further
this is it
i feel so caged
i can only go in circles
trapped in a dark hole
the one i dug myself
i cant cope with all the lies and secrecy
i cant break through the soil of this retched earth
what can i do
when im trapped
i feel so small
i feel so alone
crying myself to sleep
it never helps
i need to breathe
i need to be myself again
but how can i when change incircles me
and plays with my brittle mind
i need the strength
i have to go on
why should i
whats the point
i need to life
i can never give up
why is this so confusing
how can i change and move on
i have changed
i dont know if i can move on
ive hit rock bottom
all i can do now is try to dig up
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TwEeK
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Re: Rock Bottom
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST (User
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welcome back I'd wondered where you had gone, but what a poem to come back with.... very good write Tweek,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Rock Bottom
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:28:17 PM AEST (User
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nice write, first one of yours i've read, and it wasn't a disappointment. looking forward to more
~Jekyll |
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