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I'm Done
Contributed by
Cherriesbroken725
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:41:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I forgot about you
my love was through
I found a new boy
who saved my boo hoo's
We had fun together
for just one camp week!!
And I never even thought
about or spoke of you
So now camps over
we said out good-byes
and still we keep in touch
and tell no lies
still I forgot about you and
kept away from your eyes
but now I miss my new baby boo
then I talked to my friend
she said she talked to you
and I was like who, who's that
she said remember
your old boo?
and I said WOW I forgot about that
dude!!!!!! She said to bad cause
he thought about you!!
Then my feelings flew for both you 2!!
What should I do?
Think about you cause you live in my hood?
and far away he do?
and stop all the feelings for my new dude?
No! done that before i done it for you
so I ma say good bye only to you
SO lets stay friends like we did from the start!
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Cherriesbroken725
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2004-07-29 15:41:48]
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Re: I'm Done
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:57:59 PM AEST
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| The title really caught my attention. I love good titles. Nice work. --the Moth |
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Re: I'm Done
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:00:10 PM AEST
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wow this isn't my kinda poem but dude this poem told a true story,i agree that u shold just be his friend
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Re: I'm Done
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:30:01 PM AEST
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| good write... tells a great story |
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