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Why Is iT A Crime Because I Have Scars?
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:36:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It's funny to see,
Who don't turn away,
And who does.
Some people look at me funny,
'Coz i'm the girl,
That cut.
I try to smile,
But I just keep my head down.
Or else i'll see their faces,
And their staring frowns.
'Coz i'm the girl,
That suffered too much,
So one day,
Decided to cut.
I'm the girl,
Who'd had enough...
I keep my head down,
Move slowly on.
If i'm so bad,
What have I done wrong?
Remove the pain,
From deep inside?
WELL THEN!
LOOK AT ME!
TELL ME!
WHY THATS A CRIME?
I wear bracelets,
To cover some of my marks.
But I don't have enough to cover,
The rest of my arm.
Why is it a crime,
To release some stress?
With it inside I couldn't concentrate!
It would just stick firmly to my head...
I get home,
Walk through the big, wooden door.
My mother says "hi" to me,
But she doesn't see,
I'm feeling raw!
She barely notices me,
At all.
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deathdrop
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2004-07-29 14:36:00]
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Re: Why Is iT A Crime Because I Have Scars?
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:18:40 PM AEST
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I don't see no crime in what your doing but i see a girl that needs alot of love...
I might not agree with either cutting yourself or hurting yourself.But i know what your going through and can relate....
If you need someone to talk to pm me ok....
good write........ |
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Re: Why Is iT A Crime Because I Have Scars?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:41:42 PM AEST
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If other people are afraid to look, thats their problem, you've had enough of your own.
I hope you don't do it again, you obviously need attention and lots of love. You can find lots of support here, everyone is friendly and willing to talk. You definately have a talent for writing, why not show us some more, start there and see what happens, just don't give up. |
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Re: Why Is iT A Crime Because I Have Scars?
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:53:59 PM AEST
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Oh yes she sees, but out of fear she holds back what she doesn't want to show...but yes she sees. I know because I've been there.
I go out on the streets now, and even my freinds turn aside, not out of fear, or because I'm so ugly....but out of not wanting to see whats becoming of me...a shell now am I of what I not long ago was...its not my choice, its just life you see.....Its my wintertime of seasons...and this I know...so I venture out not, not because I don't want to go...but I want them not to have to look you see...so hold your head high and set some goals....your in your Spring time and a long, long way to go.
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Re: Why Is iT A Crime Because I Have Scars?
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 08:32:05 AM AEST
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oh deathdrop this was so sad. I can some what relate to this one. I feel your pain. Hope your ok if you need to talk im me my yahoo messenger is located on my home page here and so is my email.
Brandy |
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Re: Why Is iT A Crime Because I Have Scars?
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by clowns_can_burn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:05:47 PM AEST
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I can too relate. it really sucks going into a room filled with your family, and they ask what happened to your arm in discust. I do hope you find what your looking for....Write to me so we can chat.
Amanda |
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Re: Why Is iT A Crime Because I Have Scars?
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by hapygal80 on
Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 08:19:23 AM AEST
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| I just came across your poem here. I hope that you have been able to keep writing and have found how thereputic it can be. |
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