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The other inside
Contributed by
nickyboy
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:26:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There has always been another.
Hes been there wanting to escape and come to the surface.
but many things in my life have helped me fight him off.
But when the person strayed from me.
And the demon edges closer and closer until
He has finally reach the surface and changed
my entire life. I only can sit and watch as the demon
goes and destroys all i love. i can only sit and hope
that the one i love realizes that before its to late.
Copyright ©
nickyboy
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2004-07-29 14:26:56]
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Re: The other inside
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by waos on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:44:06 PM AEST
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| i can relate to that quite a bit i think. good job. |
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Re: The other inside
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:53:25 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Nick!
This is a heartbreaking first post... Many here though will understand the struggle, the feeling that is a darker side working against the good. Dream big (but with patience) and you'll beat that demon.
Again - Welcome!
SNM |
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Re: The other inside
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by nickyboy on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:32:28 PM AEST
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i am gonna comment about my own poem.
someone tell me what they thought please
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Re: The other inside
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 01:40:29 PM AEST
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this was so good I love it and can like relate somewhat with this poem. great job.
Brandy |
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