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to tim- it's over
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:26:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought things would be better
I was reading everything backward and upside down
I came back to express regret and forgiveness
and I am stabbed in the back- hatred is what I've found.
And for you, I have no sort of sympathy
now that I know
you were never there for me.
You have been placed to the bottom.
You are noone.
You are forgotten.
Don't come with me with words that are humle.
I have seen your actions...
you have killed me, but not longer will I stumble
on my own fleeting thoughts of us.
My heart is crushed, scattered
left to blow away like dust...
But you know you have made me strong.
Depressing self-pity,
well, that's not where I belong.
Though at first, I wanted to die
I have finally
said goodbye.
I put our love in the past.
It is over- a memory
that I hope not to last....
Copyright ©
emeraldeyes
... [
2004-07-29 14:26:23]
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Re: to tim- it's over
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:32:13 PM AEST
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I am really sorry for your pain....this poem is filled with raw emotional heartache and hurt....
*hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: to tim- it's over
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:29:27 PM AEST
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| This was excellent! You did an awesome job on this. --the Moth |
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