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She Was Me
Contributed by
Alina
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:55:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She was my worst enemy
The person I hated most
And I hid her away inside
Until she became my ghost
She was my only friend
Who truly understood
But I left her in an alley
Like I knew I always would
She was my attacker
Attacking my thoughts while I tried to sleep
So, I killed her from my memory
And left her in the ocean deep
She was my fantasy
What I always wished to be
She would look at me on the other side of the mirror
Until I shattered the mirror
Because I relized "She" was me
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-07-29 12:55:00]
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Re: She Was Me
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by princess8383 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:56:39 PM AEST
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Good write : )
Princess : ) |
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Re: She Was Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:05:31 PM AEST
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yes very good write powerful and sad..... I hope things look brighter for you now hun,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: She Was Me
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by tiny_mo on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:11:00 PM AEST
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Wow! While reading this poem I could actually see and feel everythng u felt. Like losing a part of you. Wonderfuly written.
Mo |
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Re: She Was Me
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by trustisajoke on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:11:59 PM AEST
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Very good, and touching keep it up
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Re: She Was Me
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:07:45 PM AEST
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| that was powerful. i like this poem. |
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Re: She Was Me
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by Rachelle on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:23:40 PM AEST
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Omg, I loved this poem. It was sad but the poem's powerful words kept me reading. Great Write.
~Chelle~ |
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Re: She Was Me
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:56:46 PM AEST
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| I loved this very much. I do understand this because it's me |
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