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Jelousy
Contributed by
tiny_mo
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There is a circle of friends,
Where everything tends to mend.
Within this circle there is strength,
Strength that seems unbreakable.
There is a table in the center,
With a chair for hearts so tender.
Around the edges there are wings,
Beautiful blessings but fragile to the touch.
You look around and you see faces,
Faces that bring joy and happiness.
But wait, what is this?
There is a face missing.
Where has this face gone?
To a new place in time perhaps.
A pair of wings lies in pieces,
A chair sits empty.
The strength has been wounded,
The circle of friends has been broken.
No where to go,
Nothing to do.
A life has been taken,
A soul has been lost.
Can not be brought back,
Can not be saved.
All this has happened,
One emotion is the cause.
Unjust and dangerous,
This emotion is Jelousy.
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tiny_mo
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2004-07-29 12:20:53]
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Re: Jelousy
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:26:35 PM AEST
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wow very powerful and sad write,.... jealousy can be such a destructive emotion...
I am sorry for the pain....
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Re: Jelousy
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by arden on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:22:44 PM AEST
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i agree with pixie, very powerful and very sad. i dont have much words for this cuz its just so...wow...
great write. very sad.
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Re: Jelousy
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:37:56 PM AEST
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awww... im so sorry for the loss of your friend, powerfully moving poem, on a very sensitive matter that happens far too often in this world, ty for sharing:) hugs n' love nessa
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