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Thats our star Mommy
Contributed by
Justice3310
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
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Look at all the stars Mommy they shine so bright,
Mommy its such a beautiful night
Pap Pap used to take me here to look up at the sky,
Mommy why did he have to die
I miss him Mommy I want to see his face,
I want to sit down beside him on our favorite place
That was our star Mommy do you see it twinkle,
we used to sit here Mommy even if it would sprinkle
The rain used to tickle my nose and Pap would cover my head,
we used to sit here for hours or until our noses turned red
Wish on our star Mommy I bet Pap will hear,
He will help you Mommy he knows what you fear,
Dont cry Mommy hes in Heaven he doesnt feel pain,
Lets not leave it just started to rain
See he's listenin Mommy can you feel he's love,
he heres your problems Momy even from above
We love you Pap you were an amazing man
you know what Pap I was your number one fan
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Re: Thats our star Mommy
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:39:28 AM AEST
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| oi pa... this brings many a good memory, it's beautiful. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Thats our star Mommy
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:02:26 AM AEST
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This literally brings tears
to my eyes, i can see how
much your Pap meant to you
Terrific write, and wonderful
expression of your memories
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Thats our star Mommy
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:44:37 PM AEST
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I know how you feel,my mom passed away & my chidren always talk about her & miss her,
They understand more than we do sometimes!Lovely write!Christina |
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Re: Thats our star Mommy
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by TheBirdMan on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 01:23:56 PM AEST
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| My mom passed away when I was 9, so I can definetly relate, nice write. |
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Re: Thats our star Mommy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:40:49 PM AEST
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PapPap
would love this.......now you have your own little star sent down directly from heaven
xoxo |
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