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Pieces
Contributed by
xdeathrosex
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:34:40 AM in AEST
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I'm tired of living
this horrid life not worth all the tears that have fallen from hurtful eyes.
Why am i here? I seem to ask myself every day of my life.
These pieces of me that have fallen are so easily broken that I seem to think that me, myself is breaking along with all the pieces fallen.
I can't seem to get unwanted thoughts of hate out of my head that are building upon me, making more tiny pieces break into darkness along with my remaining sanity that is keeping me in this world of hate.
I seem to ask another question to myself which is why the pieces wont all break so I can finally lose the rest of my sanity and just leave this place called Earth and finally live hapilly in peace.
But the pieces just wont seem to break quick enough, and are leaving whats left of me to suffer.
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Re: Pieces
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:43:15 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC. What a funny coincidence - that I'd be the first to welcome you and I've also written a poem entitled Pieces. Our writes have a different flare to them but this concept:
These pieces of me that have fallen
.. is the same. I do understand how you feel in that regard. It is difficult and sometimes a long process - but it IS possible to put the pieces back together and feel whole again.
Welcome again to YPDC - and thanks for sharing this-
SNM
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Re: Pieces
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:00:49 AM AEST
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Pick up the peices worth keeping discard the rest and look beyond your pain and u will find the joy in living that u seek.
very good wrriting as I once could relate to these thoughts-n-feelings.
When I found my own inner peace then I could get beyond those feelings.
Hang tuff as life is worth living aand did u eveer think about your soul comming back to Earth in a new body??
What if reincarnation is so?
We are all human andd are luved by god the same.
Keep writing as it's great theraphy.
luv, huggs, pryaers,
emy
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Re: Pieces
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:14:02 AM AEST
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Very descriptive, and good use of words to the problem you hold within. Let me tell you, I have felt this way also, and Im sure alot of people also wonder why we are all here, but we all have a purpose in life, and hopefully you will find your's. Keep holding on....
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Pieces
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by xlooseroftomorrowx on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:17:09 PM AEST
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Hey sisi, i love ur poem,and im sorry ur in pain. Im always here if u wana talk
love ur sis,
xAnix |
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Re: Pieces
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:33:17 PM AEST
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| beautiful use of words nice flow to very good poem thank you xgripx |
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