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Forgotten Again
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:24:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I waited by the phone today and yet it was the same
Another wasted memory to add to all my pain
I thought today was different
I thought today you'd call
but yet today has come and gone and it was wasted after all
Tomorrow you will call me and pretend that nothings wrong
Tell me that your sorry for telling me that you would call
I will smile on the outside and a tear will drop inside
As I tell you it don't matter, when I went to bed and cried.
Id do anything I tell you
and when I say it... it is true
I would do anything you could think of ... just to be with you!
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-07-29 01:24:05]
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by SpreadYourWings on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:25:55 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem. I can connect with it well.
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by Whispered_Voices on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:29:12 AM AEST
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| I like how everything really flowed together. nice work |
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:29:32 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:32:15 AM AEST
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Heartfelt and true.
Yet - most guys have been here too . . . and understand.
Thanks for writing. |
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:10:19 AM AEST
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thats what is happening here....
" will smile on the outside and a tear will drop inside"..good poetic line...venkat
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by brew on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:36:07 AM AEST
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Very inner feelings, that have been felt by all!
Nice writing! |
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:17:58 AM AEST
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Awh...how beautiful was that. It was just so so lovely, very heart touching & gripping. The love within for the individual shines through in the sentiments. Wat an out-standing write. Excellent & is a very enjoyable read too. Look forward to more from you. Thanks for sharing with us all.
Your fellow poet
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by arden on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:44:56 AM AEST
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well i for one have been there. lol.
i know this feeling well.
really great write. your verse was really nice. i liked this alot.
well done jenny
Arden |
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:12:33 PM AEST
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awww..... so sweet...... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by Kevin on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:50:43 AM AEST
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Wow, very good and beautifully written, and yeah, guys have been there too, i know i have.
-Kevin |
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:46:06 AM AEST
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Wonderful description of a craving love...
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Forgotten Again
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:31:19 AM AEST
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| I really connected with this ... and oh so perfectly written ... the waiting can almost drive us crazy, and yet we still sit there by the phone until we get the call the next day ... and even though we cry inside we pretend all is ok ... great write ... Jan |
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