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untitled
Contributed by
AWaiTinG13FaTe
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:42:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Everything is all messed up,every night I cry.
Someone come and take my life,just leave me here to die.
No one seems to care anymore,they all just push away.
I see no reason to keep living like this,so much hate with the coming of the day.
So many I am loathed by,I'm no longer accepted.
Steal my life,its the only way out.
With death I wont be rejected.
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AWaiTinG13FaTe
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2004-07-29 00:42:38]
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:03:07 AM AEST
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Very good writing for the first time.
keep writing, reading others and their talent etc. will really inspire u.
Hang tuff, my friend as we all have our down times.
Write, write, write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: untitled
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:05:21 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC! I'm so glad you stumbled across our little sanctuary... I assure you, you will find support here and will not be rejected in any way.
This is a heartwrenching first poem. Your pain is clearly evident. I do hope you are feeling better and that you continue to post here. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work and hoping to see joy replace the pain in your work.
Again - welcome! Nice to have you with us-
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Re: untitled
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:38:47 AM AEST
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dont worry you prolly dont wana be accepted anyway its way funner to be an outcast then to try and be something ur not to fit in but anyhow goood job nice work and i hope u write more here at YPDC.
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