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Blood Bath
Contributed by
AWaiTinG13FaTe
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:32:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Your heart is a big black hole,that was eaten by maggots.
Your soul is nowhere to be seen,a crow has taken it to hell.
Your eyes are cold and empty,because of your lies and insults.
Your more shallow than a puddle,a puddle of blood drained from my vein.
The knife cuts smoothly into my skin.
The rush of pain feels good,better than you have treated me.
The puddle gets bigger as my life grows smaller.
I am drowning in this shallow puddle,drowning in you.
You were the one i loved,you were my everything.
But you treated me like dirt,acted as if I had no feelings.
You've crushed my spirit too many times,caused too much pain that has left behind scars.
This is my near future if my love for you doesn't die first.
Copyright ©
AWaiTinG13FaTe
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2004-07-29 00:32:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blood Bath
(User Rating: 1 ) by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:39:36 AM AEST (User
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I like how the poem evolved into a love topic. I can tell you've really been hurt. i hope things go well for ya. well done my friend.
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