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House of Death
Contributed by
AWaiTinG13FaTe
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:55:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The whole world freezes when your left alone. Everything darkens as smiles turn cold.
Dark shadows cast upon the lifeless being. Pinned down by a wave of mortal sin.
Scourged to a breaking point of blood and gore. Our bond poisened and severed by malice.
Encircled by the undead amry of darkness. Familiar faces twisted by hatred and mockery.
Mortality rises as the lifeless decays. Once trusted peers turn cannibalistic.
Leave my cold dead corpse to rot. In this lonely dark place I call home.
Copyright ©
AWaiTinG13FaTe
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2004-07-28 23:55:04]
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Re: House of Death
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:17:24 AM AEST
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You've captured your emotions magically in this write.
Very dark, cold but powerfull.
I think we all have these times.
We always have our inner lites to free us from our loneliness.
Good job.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: House of Death
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by Whispered_Voices on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:34:41 AM AEST
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I really like this one. Not just cause your a friend and all but I really like when people USE THAT VOCABULARY! (and still have it make perfect sense in the process. )
*WV* |
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Re: House of Death
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:17:22 PM AEST
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| Um........dark,lovely, and very well done.Kudos. |
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