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I Lost The Greatest Friend
Contributed by
sughy
on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I lost the greatest friend
That anyone could ever share
Whenever I had a problem
Ramon was always there
Then one awful night
I made a big mistake
That lost my best friend's trust
A perfect friendship began to break
As I begin to reminsce
I think of those lonely nights
When I poured out my struggles
And he held my secrets tight
Why couldn’t I return the favor
By being the best friend I could be
Instead I was acting selfish
And only thought about me
Forever I will miss
How our friendship was so strong
And how he always supported me
When the storms seemed so long
I took our friendship for granted
I didn’t tell him the truth
Now we go our separate ways
When we were partners most our youth
I wish he’d understand
That I didn’t mean to lie
I couldn’t bare to see our friendship
Disapear or slowly die
Can he find room in his heart
To forgive a “so called friend”
And live up to our promise
“We’ll be brothers till the end”
Copyright ©
sughy
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2002-10-29 08:20:00]
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Re: I Lost The Greatest Friend
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:32:31 AM AEST
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| Wow this is a tough one! I think in time he will come around,maybe if you send him this poem your friendship will heal!Christina |
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Re: I Lost The Greatest Friend
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:51:06 AM AEST
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Great write!!! Very painful... I share your pain in this... I once faced the same situation.. thank God we resolved our problems and our friendship is stronger than ever..so hold on to hope...things may be right again..
Jenni |
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Re: I Lost The Greatest Friend
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:52:33 AM AEST
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God, i know this one all too much...
Great write.
Ali |
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