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The Two Rivers
Contributed by
Tarukar
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:40:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Where the two rivers meet
Near the oceans edge
Water caresses shore like a perfect embrace
Evening stops and stares at this perfect scene
Two lovers dance amidst the softly swaying reeds
A gentle flowing breeze
Born of the mountains above
Carries their voices through out the air
Sweet nothings and declarations of love
Pass beyond their lips
A living tapestry
Their dance is
Flowing and weaving
Soul mates in touch
The essence of art and beauty
Risen alive
Near the oceans edge
Through tides high and low
Dance do they still
Never tire of gazing into each others eyes
Dance they will
Till the two rivers run dry
Copyright ©
Tarukar
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2004-07-28 21:40:06]
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Re: The Two Rivers
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:29:05 AM AEST
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Quite well-written.
Though I wish it would have ended differently. |
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Re: The Two Rivers
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:21:26 AM AEST
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Aww Will, this is really good. It fits together as nicely as the two lovers' hearts.
I'm sure whoever the recipient of this poem ends up being that she will be delighted.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea
P.S. You've written one about rain and pink roses... I remember reading it once...it's so beautiful... are you going to post it? I do believe it would be my favorite. |
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