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I've Felt The Pain
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:40:04 PM in AEST
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I’ve Felt The Pain
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I’ve felt the pain of losing someone you loved
I’ve questioned why to the heaven above
I’ve cried until tears could no longer flow
I’ve struggled with closure as something to show
I’ve forced myself to move on put mind over heart
I’ve put on a brave face when I was falling apart
I’ve kept busy, trying to clear my mind
I’ve locked up the sleeping pills, anti-depressants and wine
I’ve put away your pictures for a chance to breathe
I’ve fought this feeling of constant need
I’ve realized that you’re never coming back
I’ve just lately started facing that fact
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2004-07-28 21:40:04]
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Re: I've Felt The Pain
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by waos on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:51:43 PM AEST
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That, like your other one I just read, also rocks. I can't imagine losing someone so close to you that you feel a part of you is missing. Or else I'm perhaps too cold to feel that now.
If all you said is true in that, you are an amazing person. To get rid of the pills (which I could never do it seems now) and the wine, and .. wow. You are a strong person.
Keep writing, I like reading them. |
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Re: I've Felt The Pain
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:28:17 AM AEST
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G'day Jeff,
This is such a gut wrenching read and simply beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: I've Felt The Pain
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:24:50 PM AEST
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| This is a really heartfelt poem, I like it alot. It has so much emotion. |
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Re: I've Felt The Pain
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:31:46 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I know it feels like nothing will ever be right again but haang in there, my friend. I know too well and much more than my share the same feelings.
Life goes on and someday u will luv again.
luv, huggs, praayer,
emy |
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