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My fallen one
Contributed by
Opium
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Living angel, withered beauty, freezing looks and killing smile
Growing passion, desprate man, at your sight I die for a while
You shine like a moon, but burn like the sun
You are my angel ...my fallen one
Every time I look at you, I fall in love
You are my life, my sweet little dove
For all the happiness and joy in my heart you've made
I owe you love ...love that shall never fade
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Re: My fallen one
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:29:48 AM AEST
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Straight from the heart,I really liked this!
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Re: My fallen one
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:51:10 AM AEST
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short, to the point, will stop anyone in their tracks...
beautiful, absolutely beautiful. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: My fallen one
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:54:25 AM AEST
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AWWWW...
How cute..
Ali |
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Re: My fallen one
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 12:18:28 PM AEST
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| This is truely beautiful. I loved it, just breathtaking. Great one! |
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Re: My fallen one
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 02:10:32 PM AEST
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oh!now that's a sweet one...
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