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Trouble in Heaven
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:58:45 PM in AEST
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He was barely two years old
still not knowing right from wrong
my little buddy, your little fan
his daddy always called him his little man
She was younger by a year or two
I still remembered the way she looked at you
an american mother, and a mexican dad
I can only imagine the dreams she had
I was working grave yards at taco bell
just seventeen about to go through hell
you came home, woke me up
youd just worked a double I can see you looked rough
youd asked me to watch the little ones
so we wathed tv and had some fun
then I dosed off and hell begun
there must have been trouble in heaven that day
cuz the lord open his gates
and took your two angels away
why he took both I dont understand
maybe its part of his masterplan
to hold one in each one of his hands
Im still hurting here on earth
Im so sorry for all its worth
six years gone by not a lot has changed
I still feel guilty, I still feel the blame
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Re: Trouble in Heaven
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:32:35 PM AEST
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wow, so terribly sad. so much to deal with. may God bring you and all involved peace.
the voice
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Re: Trouble in Heaven
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:22:36 PM AEST
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Amen. I agree with The Voice... this is sad and terrible... but hang in there... God has a plan and I'll bet peace is involved somewhere in it. I'll be praying for u and ur family.
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Re: Trouble in Heaven
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:34:37 PM AEST
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| I Love This Poem. I Can Say This Is Very Good. |
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Re: Trouble in Heaven
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:50:15 PM AEST
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| This hit me hard for my daughters name is Leann,I cant imagine what your going through all I know is I hope you will find peace,It wasnt your fault.Christina |
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Re: Trouble in Heaven
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:51:22 AM AEST
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omg this is so sad, i feel very down after reading this, I cant for one minute imagine how this must feel *hugs*
I am sorry for your losses
pixie xx |
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