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If You Love Me
Contributed by
imlostbutloved69
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:38:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you love me
Treat me right
Hold me close
Dare to put up a fight
If you love me
hold me near
Comfort me
Wipe away every tear
If you love me
Tell me how you feel
If you feel the same way
Keep it real
If you love me
Just say it
Open your mouth and talk
I'm tired of this silence ****
If you love me
Be you
I really am in love
And I know it's true
Copyright ©
imlostbutloved69
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2004-07-28 19:38:31]
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Re: If You Love Me
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:54:33 PM AEST
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very nice write.
the voice
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Re: If You Love Me
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:46:11 PM AEST
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This is good... very good and well written... it makes me want to e write... "YES! I LOVE U!"
LOL... not sure who I'm saying this too... lol
Good write... keep writing
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Re: If You Love Me
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:15:24 AM AEST
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what a lovely sweet melodious write. very enjoyable read. that was well writen, good work.
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