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finally cease...

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:57:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

im laying on my death bed
the dreams,floating around in my head
i hear the voices in the dark,their laughter at my pain
the tablets i have taken,i think to myself...no never again
never again will it touch my lips
and let deaths angel take me away with a *kiss*
my vision is blurred,and my feelings out heard
this strange absence,its seems obsurd
i lay flat on my face
and gasp for breath,my eye sight black,like the depths of space
the feeling in my stomach is gurgiling wildly,the side effects of an abused body
im left,abandoned,here,were i will be found by no other than nobody
the flicker of my eye lid,
as i slip under the dreamless slumber,the angel tutters,'she's only a kid...'
i let go of the bottle,the contents falls,my heads swimming
my screams smuthered,my maddness brimming
im letting go,of this life so dear
and im running back to you,im finally here
back where i belong
aside heavens song
this crime of the damned,is truly unamed
as the devi speaks,is tongue untamed
ive finally broke free,
my eyesigh fixed...i can see
the wonders i missed
the boyfriends i never kissed
the little loves
the brigh white doves
im surging with peace
im happy content,this drug abuse can finally cease....

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-28 17:57:38]
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Re: finally cease... (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:44:30 PM AEST
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that's really really good. i liked it a lot. it flows really good when i'm reading it even with little punctuation. i hope you are doing alright and if you want you can PM me and we can talk. take care and keep writing cause you are good at it.

Jekyll

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