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Contributed by Steven_Fenton1982 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:57:53 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

It takes a tear to start a river, it forms an ocean to hold these words.
If I died tomorrow, would the world shed a tear? would the rain pour?
I'm a dreamer, my head is in the clouds, but my heart is in the flames.
When love becomes hate, the line becomes as faint as the feeling in your heart

Lost in a memory, a faded face and a broken dream in a shattered mirror.
If today feels like yesterday, will tomorrow feel like today?
The child inside us all screams out "why are you crying? it's only love".
If it takes one more step, I'll strike it down, no quarter asked nor given.

When gold begins to rust,
and hope is lost in the dust.
See you in anothers arms,
my patience fades away.

When you're blinded by your hate, why should shadows shed you light?
Every lie was a drunken promise, every promise is made to be broken.
When you're guided by the hate, why should the lifehouse guide you home?
All the lies become your truth, then the truth becomes a blur.

Copyright © Steven_Fenton1982 ... [ 2004-07-28 16:57:53]
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Re: Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:22:58 PM AEST
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very sad and strong emotional write. I ask myself these questions almost every day.

If I died tomorrow, would the world shed a tear? would the rain pour?

If today feels like yesterday, will tomorrow feel like today?

[ great job ]

Brandy

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