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20 Years
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:52:04 PM in AEST
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I have learned in my 20 years of life just because I'm alive doesn't mean I'm living.
Just because we have freedom does not make us free.
Because we are made equal doesn't make us the same equality.
Just because there are no slaves doesn't mean we are not slaves to someone or something.
We have the right to speak freely but that doesn't mean freely that we speak.
That with every word that is spoken it is permanent it can not be erased or burned away.
I have learned that in your darkest most vulnerable moment when your alone in that dark empty room.
That in reality your not alone he is there with you.
You may not see him but he is there.
He is the wind that scatters the Autumn leaves.
He is the rain that nourishes the April flowers.
He is the winter snow that covers the ground.
He is the suns rays that shine over the bird in flight.
This I have learned in my 20 years of life.
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Re: 20 Years
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by stubbo87 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:37:51 PM AEST
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loved it, the premise and words, i would personally switch some wording in a few lines but great job, very true!!!
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Re: 20 Years
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:38:08 PM AEST
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wow! i found this kinda spiritual great job!
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Re: 20 Years
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:32:49 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and inspiring.
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Re: 20 Years
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by blackholesun on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:42:12 PM AEST
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| i loved it!how empowering to read this,im assuming this is about god,it reminded me not to feel so sorry for myself. |
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