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Suicide Note
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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one last time i say good-bye
this good-bye is not meaning i'll see ya
in a few,i'm gonna go and never come back
i hate everyone,i know thats not good
these thoughts running through my head
so fast nothing is coming in clear enough
for me to understand,this is real,i can see
you love me but i also see that you hate me
as i'm about to hit the ground i will see
your face,telling me to get up and i * up again
its too late we can't go back and erase
all the ***** i got myself into,this is my suicide note
i just wanna die,i don't wanna be here next to you
i have to cope with all this terrible *****,i hate my *****
life,no one sees me but me,some days i don't want to
these all so similar days and nights will never go away
no matter how much i change i could never forget
the way i used to be,i was so crazy i was so stupid
taking my life would be selfish,but i'm sick and tired of
looking in this broken mirror at a heartless little girl
so many people tell me this and that,so many people
say its up to me.it seems like they could careless
as i'm about to hit the ground i will see
your face,telling me to get up and i ***** up again
its too late we can't go back and erase
all the ***** i got myself into,this is my suicide note
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savedbydeath
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2004-07-28 14:50:52]
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Re: Suicide Note
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:03:02 PM AEST
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i'm not 1 4 death but it seems like u r,but i was wondering what is it like to always think of death???
ps the poem was wonderfully written and emotionalized
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Re: Suicide Note
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:57:44 PM AEST
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I get things feelings alot...i know how bad they are...but this is a great poem...good job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:46:49 PM AEST
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There was a time i wanted to kill myself...
It's not a good feeling....your poem is extremely well written....you express it so well...I can almost feel those emotions......... |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:15:56 PM AEST
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| good write i always wanna kill myself still tryin to see way i wont ur one thing so yea |
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