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Rain, Lucerne And Glass
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:02:04 PM in AEST
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Rain,
It Poured Down Like Rushing Falls
Buckets It Seemed
Drenched In Cold, Swiss Rain
Lucerne,
A Picturesque, Yet Active Town
The Sad Lion, Crying For Lost Soldiers
Castles Stand High, Like Powerful Overlords
Glass,
The Molten Glass, So Hot Like Spewing Lava
Those Hard Workers Trying To Show Us,
The Art Of Ancient, Lovely Glass Blowing
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2004-07-28 14:02:04]
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Re: Rain, Lucerne And Glass
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:18:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I could feel the rain freezing and drenching everything in sight and I could see the glass art too. Beautiful, I must say.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Rain, Lucerne And Glass
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:40:05 AM AEST
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Good write.
Every line says so much here.
I liked this one especially :
'The Sad Lion, Crying for Lost Soldiers.' |
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Re: Rain, Lucerne And Glass
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:45:03 PM AEST
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| in german class we learned about switzerland, and lucerne is one of the bigger cities of that small nation. i think this tried to show a wealth of information, but its not really absorbed all that well by the reader. |
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