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In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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soon, dear, you'll learn to cope
and you'll learn to dry your eyes
and over time
you'll learn to wipe away the tears
before they even appear
and eventually, there really will be none at all
and you'll learn to say, "I'm fine"
and sound convincing
so that they'll walk away
and eventually, you really will be fine
and you'll learn how to fake a smile
with your mouth, not your eyes,
and laugh on the outside
and eventually, you really will smile again
and you'll learn how to think less about him
and not have his presence fill your days
and you'll learn how to live on without him
but dear, you will never forget him
and in the back of your mind,
in the sunlight, in the rain,
in every blade of grass and birdsong,
he will always be there
watching over you
and though you will someday not cry
and someday be fine
and someday smile
and someday survive on your own,
in the the back of your mind,
in the sunlight, in the rain,
in every blade of grass and birdsong,
he will always be there.
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:39:07 PM AEST
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Awwww this is a very lovely piece of writing....very encouraging... *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:01:46 PM AEST
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| Nora, this holds such truth and beauty. I feel sure tht Kie will cherish this forever. In time she will be strong again. You have created a beautiful hearfelt image here. |
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:16:35 PM AEST
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| this is a really beautiful poem |
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:51:24 PM AEST
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| This was written with tremendous compassion and understanding of loss. I LOVED the title, and the sentiment woven in the poem. Terrific - |
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:37:23 PM AEST
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You are so wise for your years, so talented, with so much to say and to give. Thanks for giving some of that to our friend when she is in need.
Stitch |
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:38:27 PM AEST
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Nora, you may be young in physical years but you are an old soul inside, just like me.
I will not only cherish this poem forever, I feel a very strong connection to it.
It hit me straight in the heart and I can't stop the emotion.
There was a poem read at the ceremony. It was entitled "I did not die" I can't remember who wrote it but I do know that he would have loved this poem and what it said.
Everything is trapped inside of me and the loss has overwhelmed me at times.
The greatest one person i've ever known, my guide, confidante, teacher and the giant who read me stories when I was five has left.
Yet I know that every thing you said in your beautiful, touching & wonderful poem is all true.
Thank you Nora, I cherish this.
Kie |
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:06:39 PM AEST
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Nora, this was so amazing. just a very beautiful piece. so thoughtful and kind of you to write this for kie.
my heart goes out to you kie. *hugs*
nicely done nora.
Becky |
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:13:23 PM AEST
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This is the an amazing gift... a treasure. What everyone has said here is most definitely true... you are a wonderful, old soul walking around in a young person's frame - it is the only possible explanation for your talent, your level of knowing and your amazing compassion. Everyone should have a friend like you, Nora. You are as much a gift (more!) as this poem is - and THIS is beautiful.
This is yet another example of your incredible ability to speak from the very core of your heart and to move the reader in unbelievable ways.
With heartfelt hugs to both you and Kie-
SNM |
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:44:54 PM AEST
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Geez, talk about mushy. *isn't in a mushy mood* It is sweet though... oh Nora, you're always so sweet. lol. See what I mean now? Seriously, this is beautiful. Totally my kind of poetry. Great job.
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:56:11 PM AEST
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this is beautiful nora:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:30:47 AM AEST
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Oh what a lovely and loving thing for you to do for Kie.
Your poem was so true and so endearing in every way......I shall never forget your terminology........in every blade of grass and birdsong........because that's just the way it is. You learn to adjust......but he will always be there.......as part of your soul.....that part never departs!
This is lovely indeed!
Poetic hugs to you two kie and you too
consue |
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:00:57 AM AEST
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Oh Nora...
I'm so glad you posted this. You really are a sweetie.
This is beautiful.
Amazing.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:28:28 PM AEST
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Kind and sincere. You are true, honest, loving friend. Very considerate and sympathetic words. Keep it up.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: In Every Blade of Grass and Birdsong
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
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| Again Nora you have pulled at the heart strings. Kie is great. This poem is wonderful. :) Beautiful |
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by Cynthia on
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| Nora, you have such a wonderful, loving heart. May God bless you my dear friend. *S* Cynthia |
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