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devotion
Contributed by
kammie
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:48:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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devotion
a word said easily
devotion
an emotion felt difficultly
but you just know
when the guy is right
you can devote to him
and let him enjoy
heart body and soul
for life
life
short sweet
long hard
or full of love and devotion
devoted to one
one devoted one devouring
one giver one taker
i would give
if he would take
but i dont think he knows
i would show devotion
to my last day on the earth
but how can i devote if he wont take
Copyright ©
kammie
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2004-07-28 12:48:32]
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Re: devotion
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by ExoticDreamer on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:52:44 PM AEST
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| Nice thought process on an all too real situation. I think you have expressed this nicely with your words. An enjoyabel verse to read. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: devotion
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:41:04 PM AEST
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| i think its rather ironic that your discription is basically saying, "i want reads" and then you end up in the least read section. frankly, it is up to you to get the reads. hundreds of people come to the site everyday, what makes your poem worth reading. the reads will come, when the poem is deserving of it. usually good titles and a good reputation do the trick. |
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