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Daydream
Contributed by
ExoticDreamer
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:44:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Daydream
Away I walk down trodden path,
fallen leaves beneath my feet.
Quickened step and then perhaps
my lover shall I meet.
With sandy hair and hazel eyes;
lips forming ripe to kiss.
Chiseled arms with working tan,
a pleasure I dare not miss.
With smiling sparkle on his face
he'd call me up to him.
Breath held drawn and senses light
arising mania looms within.
My heart would pound close to my chest
beating lively as a kitten.
My tousled hair would fall about,
I'd know that I'd been smitten.
In breathy sigh my passion burns
for this lover of the day.
With shouts in throes of ecstasy
would I find more words to say.
With flush of face I actualize;
continuing on my course.
Such swooning left a crackle sound
covertly mingled with voice hoarse.
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ExoticDreamer
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2004-07-28 12:44:15]
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Re: Daydream
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:51:18 PM AEST
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Awwww wonderful poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Daydream
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:52:27 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. It was very good. I think everyone wants this.
~sMiLe~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Daydream
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:56:37 PM AEST
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~sigh~...the beauty of this verse is breathtaking...
Chiseled arms with working tan,
a pleasure I dare not miss
This verse really gets the heart racing!
Wonderful piece from a very talented writer..
WinterFawn |
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Re: Daydream
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:39:29 PM AEST
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Whimsical and as attractive as any daydream.
An enjoyable read into the fantasy of you,
Thankls for writing, and welcome to YPDC. |
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